Dark Thread Breathe Whisper one soft word into the night Death © All Rights Reserved A. F. Stewart Love this? Share the love...Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading... Related
8 thoughts on “Dark Thread”
That gave me goose bumps. Very dark.
Thanks, Pam. I was trying a poetry form new to me and this is what tumbled out.
You should submit it to Doug’s SunWinks. I think (stress think) that’s what his challenge is for this week.
I think his prompt this week is for stream-of-consciousness; this is a form poem (Lanterne).
Glad you understand this poetry stuff. I try, but always get it wrong. In any case, I hope your poem gets attention. It’s dark and quite wonderful.
This is dark but very beautiful. Please remind me, Anita, which form it is. The syllable count here is 1,2,3,4,1.
That’s the correct syllable count; it’s a Japanese form, a Lanterne. Named because the form is supposed to resemble a lantern.
Thanks, Anita. I like the form.